Submission
She lays open wide on the bed
Partially dressed in lace of red
He stands above her
Her strong consummate lover
Taking her ever so slowly
As she releases and moans lowly
He now owns her madly
While she submits to him gladly
She takes her pleasure
In his every measure
In the act of submission
She gives him permission
To own her completely
She surrenders to him so sweetly
© 2015 Linda A. Long – All Right Reserved
Life is best when lived passionately
Note:
Day 10, The Final Day of Writing 201, Poetry
Three requirements were:
- Pleasure: I returned to poetry that comes naturally to me, Erotic Poetry for my blue-eyed muse💋❤️🔥
Sonnet: It’s 14 lines and Sonnetish 😁👍
Apostrophe: Written to a person or thing, I usually do write my erotic poems in this manner. But this one flowed better as it is
very sensual and evocative 🙂
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That’s what I was going for… Thanks 😁
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